So I’ve been having some relationship issues….I won’t bore you with details. Actually, it might be anything but boring, but anyways maybe another time. But I recently wrote a poem about my feelings, and Aaron suggested I post it…so here it is:
Thinking of You
I can’t stop thinking of you.
I wish you could end my pain.
With each time I see you,
A knife in my back digs deeper.
But not seeing you hurts even worse.
You say the distance is far too great
For a relationship to be considered.
It doesn’t matter that we connect
Better than anybody I’ve ever met.
Isn’t it worth just a try?
Do I keep the hope in my soul alive?
Or let these thoughts die?
Who would I be if I didn’t care for you?
I’ve felt this way so long,
Could I bear the pain it would cause?
You look into my eyes and smile.
It’s as if I can see and feel your care.
I wish I could end this feeling.
I can’t stop thinking of you.
I wish you could end my pain.
So just a little messing around. Maybe someday everything will all work out.
July 24th, 2008 at 3:27 pm
good poem.
cheers!
July 25th, 2008 at 5:04 pm
That is very nice. write more!!
July 26th, 2008 at 12:49 am
It’s about time we had a poet back on this blog.
Poetry is awesome. I miss Lord Card.
July 27th, 2008 at 9:52 am
Hope everything works out for you…
-Lee